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Learn to control your money As a saying going,'money is everything and money is nothing'.Money can help you achieve many goals,buy many things,to make your wishes comes true. So almost everyone love money and spare no effors to earn money. But on the other hand, money can not buy love,frishenship and passing time.So my opinion is whoerver you are ,rich or poor, learn to control your money.If you are rich,don not waste money, If you are poor, You should be thrifty and still be happy. As a student,of course, I am not rich.It has been reported that some of my peers even sold their kidney for a iphone 6.This is absurd.As for me,I will not cherish this expensive goods which is not fit for my stage.Thers is by no means for me to gain a life of luxury. So first,one should have a correct idea about who he is,what they own,and the most important one is what you want to do in the future. If you want to be successful and can have enough money to support your family, you should wok hard now.Some one else who controled by money but not have much may sob, steal which may lead them to a severe punishment and a bad life. So we sholud learn to control money.We should earn money through our dillegency and honesty. As a student we should not pay much attention to our fortune which is harmful for our development. We must remember that what we do today to gain knowledge,span sight,improve ability may divert to money tommrow.