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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33573
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
评语:

全文结构较为严谨;文中高级词汇的使用需加强,另外要注意词汇拼写的检查;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

Learn to control your money As a saying going,'money is everything and money is nothing'.Money can help you achieve many goals,buy many things,to make your wishes comes true. So almost everyone love money and spare no effors to earn money. But on the other hand, money can not buy love,frishenship and passing time.So my opinion is whoerver you are ,rich or poor, learn to control your money.If you are rich,don not waste money, If you are poor, You should be thrifty and still be happy. As a student,of course, I am not rich.It has been reported that some of my peers even sold their kidney for a iphone 6.This is absurd.As for me,I will not cherish this expensive goods which is not fit for my stage.Thers is by no means for me to gain a life of luxury. So first,one should have a correct idea about who he is,what they own,and the most important one is what you want to do in the future. If you want to be successful and can have enough money to support your family, you should wok hard now.Some one else who controled by money but not have much may sob, steal which may lead them to a severe punishment and a bad life. So we sholud learn to control money.We should earn money through our dillegency and honesty. As a student we should not pay much attention to our fortune which is harmful for our development. We must remember that what we do today to gain knowledge,span sight,improve ability may divert to money tommrow.

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