托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误。

The topic of the website is Gap year, and the title is called “Experience gap year~ follow your dream”. This web site focuses on gap year traveling. Four images were taken using a digital camera, and seven image were download from Pixaby; a free image download website. Also, one image were scanned using a scanner, and all of these twelve images are copyright- compliant. In addition, since the web site focuses on traveling, most images were scenic spots and sceneries around different countries, like Eiffel Tower (French), Aegean Sea (Greece), London Bridge, Statue of Liberty (America), and Mandalay Palace (Burma). These images present that students can follow their dreams to find out their interests through traveling to different countries.