2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；文章词汇不够丰富，但单词拼写要认真检查。

The most interestingplace i would like is Donghuoshan Park in my hometown,there have too much trees and flowers,but the most impressive plsce for me is the lack in the park,there have so many fish which absorb so many people to do fishing here.The park has a small beach with the lake,and children will play in here with happinese. If you walk here then it will spends you so much time ,so you can take a bus in the park.When you walk on the mountion,you must will like the fresh air,that is the best thing i like in the park,every time i walked here then i did not want to go home. if you want to come to my hometown,you must do not want to leave here,and fall in love with my hometown.