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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6295
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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On maintaining trust With the development of society,people become more and more suspicious and cold to others because they are lack of trust to each other.There is no denying the fact that our world will become horrible and no bright and shine anywhere while we are no longer trust anybody anytime.And there are some reasons following. For one hand,we may lose a lot of friends and then change into a lonely person.When you get into troubles and meet some difficulties with which you can't cope,no one is willing to afford a help to you and your life must be full of pain and sadness.For another hand,it will do a damage to our economic systems and have a negative effect on our social stainable development and finally will give rise to a lot of bankrupt companies.What's worse,once two countries are no more trust each other,it may lead to a war between them which will cause a number of deaths and injuries. In conclusion,in order to build up a bright and meaningful life,we should maintain our trust to other people.Only in this way can we create a friendly world!

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