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My favourite hobby is playing football。i fall in love with playing football by chance。 one day i find a football on my way home,then my friend and me were together playing,from then on, i fall in love with playing deeply。i always train and compelte with my classmater。my favourite football star is hamo of england, my best dream is that become a professional football player。