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The Dragon Boat Festival In china,There is a special day at may 5th in terms of chinese lunar year.It has a long history since Quyuan,a famous chinese politian,who chose to jump to MiLuo River to death at this special day.He killed himself for his country and his strong patrolism affected chinese people a lot more. When knowing the tragedy of Quyuan, People in his age started to throw foods to the river in case Quyuan's body would be eaten by the fishes. From then on, It has been a tradition for rowing boats and throwing foods especially Zongzi at may 5th. Nowadays May 5th is a public holiday in china.There are all kinds of activities to celebrate it.Competetion of dragon boats is an interesting one.In this game.People in different boats consisting of diffrent teams will compete in a river or a lake.All the boats may decorated heavily .Every boats will work as a team and row as fast as they can.Numerous audiences exclaime excitingly.Just imagine the unbelievable scene! I think everyone should remember this holiday and cherish the spirit of Quyuan.We sholud be responsible for our contry as a citizen.This is not just a holiday for relaxing but a chance to reflex oneself.What wo should do to our country,This in indeed the true theme of this holiday.
