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2006年考研英语作文真题:盲目的崇拜

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:57浏览次数:2858
要求:
题目 盲目的崇拜(题目自拟)
说明 Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160~200 words
要求
1.describe the photos briefly
2.interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them
3.give your point of view

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As is depicted in the two pictures,the first picture is a man who wrote "beckham" in his face. The second is a man who spend 300 yuan in making a hair style like beckham is cut hair by barber in the barbershop. The drawing reflects a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking. With the development of society, a sea of questions happened. For instance, the growing people are pursuiting stars in various ways crazily like in the picture. The reason is that individuals, nowadays, have more time and energy to do other things except work and study. Besides, idol worship can meet their heart, let their delighted and excited as well. What'more, some features of the star appeal to them and they can do something that the common person badly want while can't do. I do believe that we can worship our idol with a sensible attitude. The first thing we should understand is that the star is also a common person, they can't do anything well, thus we cannot blind to idolize. Next, learning the good quality and behaviour of them is necessary to us. The last not the least, treating a thing with reason don't follow the herd.

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