语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法基础较为扎实。
China is being celebrated for its handicrafts,but the most representational handcraft is pottery, Pottery is made by forming a clay body into objects of a required shape and heating them to high temperatures in a kiln to induce reactions that lead to permanent changes, including increasing their strength and hardening and setting their shape. There are wide regional variations in the properties of clays used by potters and this often helps to produce wares that are unique in character to a locality. It is common for clays and other minerals to be mixed to produce clay bodies suited to specific purposes. Nowadays,many people will spend a lot of money to purchasing the ceramic product as an art and crafts,but why so many people