字数:200满分:100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As is depicted in the two pictures,the first picture is a man who wrote "beckham" in his face. The second is a man who spend 300 yuan in making a hair style like beckham is cut hair by barber in the barbershop. The drawing reflects a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking. With the development of society, a sea of questions happened. For instance, the growing people are pursuing stars in various ways crazily like in the picture. The reason is that individuals, nowadays, have more time and energy to do other things except work and study. Besides, idol worship can meet their heart, let their delighted and excited as well. What'more, some of the characteristics of star attracts individuals.Finally, they can do something that the ordinary people badly want to do and can't do. I do believe that we can worship our idol with a sensible attitude. The first thing we should understand is that the star is also a common person, they can't do anything well, thus we cannot blind to idolize. Next, learning the good quality and behaviour of them is necessary to us. Only in the way ,can we have a colorful and meaning life.