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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71616
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇表达比较灵活多变,尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当;作者句法基础较为扎实。

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China is being celebrated for its handicrafts,but the most representational handcraft is pottery, Pottery is made by forming a clay body into objects of a required shape and heating them to high temperatures in a kiln to induce reactions that lead to permanent changes, including increasing their strength and hardening and setting their shape. There are wide regional variations in the properties of clays used by potters and this often helps to produce wares that are unique in character to a locality. It is common for clays and other minerals to be mixed to produce clay bodies suited to specific purposes. Nowadays,many people will spend a lot of money to purchasing the ceramic product as an art and crafts,but why people like to cost their money to buy the ceramic product,which not worth spending considerably money,in order to help you figure out this question,I will give you some ideas in several aspects Firstly is the process,the process of making ceramic product is very complicated, Genereally speaking, it will cost a lot of time and energy

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