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2011安徽考试书面表达试题及答案

发布时间:2013-06-06 18:11浏览次数:3429
要求:

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

    注意: 词数不少于60.

    提示词: 游乐园   amusement park

                垃圾箱   bin


用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多。

用户练习作文:

Last Sunday,we had a class meeting discussing about where to go for our spring outing.My classmates came up with different suggestions, such as going boating,going to an amusement park and mountain climbing.Finally we agreed upon mountain climbing. The next day,we started very early in the morning,we had a great time while enjoying the beautiful views and the fresh air.However when we reached the top,we were shocked by so many litters there and here.Then we decided to collect them and put them in the recycling and non-recycling bins respectively.We were very tired when we finished the work,but we were very happy to see the mountain become clean again. In all, our spring outing was very meaningful.

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