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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:57浏览次数:3212
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Perseverance makes people stronger.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮。你持有什么观点?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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Dehua county is located in the middle of Fujian Province, which is one birthplace of China's ceramic culture. It is said that Dehua country in Quanzhou, Jingdezhen in Jiangxi and Hunan Liling comprise China's three major modern porcelain. Dehua kiln is a famous ancient kiln in the South China, named after the site is located in Dehua County of Fujian province. Center kiln is located in central Fujian Daiyunshan hinterland, where China clay is rich in resources, adequate water, convenient transportation is ideal porcelain firing. In 2006, Dehua country applies for national cultural heritage, and then declares the name of Dehua porcelain sculpture firing techniques. Dehua ceramics decoration art is very exquisite, adornment gimmick is rich and varied, and it in succession develops engraving, flowers and printing and other traditional decoration technology based on the bold innovation, extensive use of bunch of flowers, decals and inscribing poems in English and decorative techniques, making full use of Dehua white porcelain few impurities creates a variety of works of art without applying any color material and becomes the artistic characteristics of Dehua porcelain. The decorative elements are a part of China's splendid cultural heritage, which drawn from folk life, many people love to see and hear the theme, such as having strong national style and local characteristics' plum blossom, Magnolia, lotus, the eight immortals, dragon and Phoenix etc. Dehua porcelain production methods can be divided into two kinds, one is selected high-quality kaolin direct forming, and the one turn of the mold after grouting or Tuoyin molding. Dehua porcelain general in Adobe After dry again according to the need to decide whether the glazed, and then placed in a kiln, in more than 1000 degrees celsius high temperature firing a finished product. From the perspective of function, Dehua ceramics products can be roughly divided into daily life appliance including plates, bowls, cups, plates, pot, stationery, lamps and candlesticks; decorative furnishings including bottle, respect, Gu and Ding, furnace, beans. These two kinds of objects are full of simple style of rigorous, traditional means strong. With a texture white, delicate jade and smooth glaze, hit the sound as musical characteristics, so Dehua white porcelain is called "China white". The special custom made thin tire products, thin and exquisite beyond compare. Dehua folk sculpture artists will be combined with sculpture and ceramic art, specializes in the production of white porcelain Guanyin, the white porcelain Guanyin deportment vivid, is universally acknowledged the white porcelain treasures. Dehua white porcelain for color is gorgeous, but the pursuit of simplicity, Mazumdar, elegant beauty, for the materials has sufficient understanding and design positioning and orientation is accurate, fully demonstrating the creative intelligence of the ancient craftsmen. If white porcelain kiln in Jingdezhen is famous for its blue and white glaze, then Dehua white porcelain is mainly to milky white, glaze layer Yurun, color jade showing the characteristics of pursuit, containing intriguing charm, compared with similar wonderful. With unique style, using natural materials and exquisite craftsmanship and artistic creation, the artistic achievements of Dehua porcelain in our country and even in world history of sculpture becomes invincible the wonderful work of art based on the art of sculpture in the world. The legend of immortal character reflects the real life of the characters in the story. With simple language and unique aesthetic consciousness AND through the "porcelain" techniques to characterize shape object and the inner world, lifelike, the formation of unique aesthetic concept, have opened up a new realm of porcelain art.

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