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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;适当增加高级词汇的使用,拼写错误稍微有点多。

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With the development of the science and technology,the computer are being invented more and more smartly.Enjoying its convenience,most of us now become raliable to it. When you want to read a book ,you may choose to surf the internet rather than going out to buy the book with extra money .Without leaving for the store,we can shop everything on the internet without the barriers brought from the time and apace.The most conveniant thing wo may prefer is that wo could search plenty of things just clicking our mouse.The computer is changing the ways that we communicate with.People has no need to chat with others face to face only when they are staying together .Besides, they can talk to at every time with the computers. However,with the time is going ,more and more people product increasing ralies on the internet.It is obvious that some of us would like to facing the virtual life on the internet insteading of the real life .The worst thing is that many teenagers are addicted to the computer games which causes many problems such as being tired with studies. As far as i am concerned,the computer did really do good to us ,but we should put a right attitude to it.

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