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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:57浏览次数:3297
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Perseverance makes people stronger.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮。你持有什么观点?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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适当增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但词汇量积累还要努力。

用户练习作文:

we all know, professors‘ routine in universities are mainly made up by two activities——teaching and researching. However, it is hard to tell which part should be their priority. Some professors prefeAsr to concentrate on lessons for students, while others hold an opposite idea. From my point of view, educating is relatively more significant for lecturers rather than conducting researches, especially when the develpment of students and reputation of the university are both taken into consideration.

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