托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；高级词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

To begin with, it is professors' basic duty to spend time and energy on educating students. The level student are finally able to reach is closely relevant to the sense of responsibility which professors show both on and off class. John Swift, for instance, is a professor in Yale University major in linguistics whose priority is education. Five days out of a week he would like to spend together with his students and helps them with their all kinds of hardships on their studies and life. Finally, it comes out that several students of his become famous writers with many best-sellers while others become editors or journalists. Thanks to these kind of teachers, literary is injected with new vitality constantly.