托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。

In addition, whether professors focus on teaching jobs also influence the reputation of the university. First, it would be so ridiculous for the public to know a university is not keen on education and this might arise negative social comments. Second, the improper preference of professors may lead to the decreasing numbers of students' entrance. In order to train experts and intellectuals in various fields, the source of students is always an important indicator to judge the potential possibilities of universities. However, how could students still be eager to the universities that do not want to cultivate them? In a long run, these universities will be more likely to become a research institute instead of university even with many advanced papers and research.