文章上下文衔接自然;采用了一些简单的从句;作者词汇表达不够丰富,另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。
my favorite sport is pingpang ball.my ball-age is very long and my skill is also very good.I can insist playing pingpang ball till to get old.sometimes I can join some competitions and get some joys.compare with bedminton,playing pingpang is more easy.it's suit to retires.recently,we set up a group in weixin,then it's so speedy to invite ball friends to do sport.in this group,our skill is average,so we can play very happy.