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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33541
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Good morning,respected professors.It is my honor to be here and take this interview.Thank you for giving me this chance. First,let me introduce myself.My name is Wu Chunrong. I just had my twenty-first birthday several days ago. I come from a little village in Yichang,Hubei province.It is a beautiful place with green hills and clear waters.As a Tujia ethnic minority,I feel proud of that. Wuhan Institute Technology is my alma mater.My major is bio-engineering.During the past 4 years in my college,I have learned most of the courses of my specialty including microbiology,cell biology,molecular biology,biochemistry and so on.In this period,I have built up a solid foundation for professional knowledge comprehensively improve my quality.Besides,I take part in Student Union and Young Volunteers Association,which help me get a lot of experiences.So planing an item is not a big problem for me. When I was a senior high school student,I have decided to devote my life in biology.But after studying in university,I realized that I can’t achieve my objectives without continued learning.Huazhong University of science and technology is the best choice for me to make it. Generally speaking,I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in.Actually,lifelong learning is important for me.In my spare time,I like singing and reading.Both of them can make me relax.I also like computer very much.I usually study some software on my own,such as Photo-shop and CAD. Finally,thank you for your listening.I hope you can give me a chance to realize the value of my life.

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