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文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。
In our life, people is afraid to say "No" to others. I think it isn't a good phenomenon. Although happiness lies in giving help to others is Chinese fine tradition. But a man isn't mahatma, he can't do every things by himself. So if a thing you can't completed task, you must institute refuse it. Instead, many people don't refuse others because they want to make everyone like them and think them are kind. It can make a man become a pinup person, but since then his time not only belong hinself, and he must sacrifice more and more time and energy to keep this prase.
