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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1892
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
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作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

In our life, many people are afraid to say "No" to others. I think it doesn't a good phenomenon. Although happiness lies in giving help to others is Chinese fine tradition. But a man isn't mahatma, he can't do everything by himself. So if a thing you can't complete task, you must refuse it. Instead, many people don't refuse others because they want to make everyone like them and to envaluate them are kind. It can make a man become a pinup person, but since then his time not only belong himself, and he must sacrifice more and more time and energy to keep this prase.

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