作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
In our life, many people are afraid to say "No" to others. I think it doesn't a good phenomenon. Although happiness lies in giving help to others is Chinese fine tradition. But a man isn't mahatma, he can't do everything by himself. So if a thing you can't complete task, you must refuse it. Instead, many people don't refuse others because they want to make everyone like them and to envaluate them are kind. It can make a man become a pinup person, but since then his time not only belong himself, and he must sacrifice more and more time and energy to keep this prase.