拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
In our life, many people are afraid to say "No" to others. I think it doesn't a good phenomenon. Although happiness lies in giving help to others is Chinese fine tradition. But a man isn't mahatma, he can't do everything by himself. So if a thing you can't complete task, you must refuse it. Instead, many people don't refuse others because they want to make everyone like them and to evaluate them are kind. It can make a man become a pinup person, but since then his time not only belong himself, and he must sacrifice more and more time and energy to keep this prase.