小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

lily is my friend.she is 8 years old.she has blue long hair,small black eyes and a big nose. she is in class four ,grand two.she is good at english.when i was in trouble,she always help me.i am happy to meet her.yesterday,we went to the zoo together ,we saw many animals,such as tigers, monkeys and rabbits. the pandas are very fuuny,we have a good time.