小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is Lily.She is a beautiful girl.She has black long hair, nice big eye and a small mouth.She is good at English. when I in trouble,she often help me in English.She likes playing piano and reading.free time,we also go to the library to take knowledge to enrish ourselves.Yesterday,we went to the zoo have a good time!