2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；用词丰富，高级词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

With the development of technology,computers have come into our families.People use computer to work,study and entertain.They have play a vital role in our daily life.I couldn't image how terrible if we don't have the computer one day.Could you image? Since the computer has been invented,the whole world has became different.People's lifestyle become more intelligent and simpler.Today if we need something ,we can choose them from tremendous amounts of products online.If we miss our relatives or friends just call him and we can chat with then immediately.Computers can assit us do many magical things.For instances we can make our photoes more beautiful and we can make our voice more magnetic. However computers also have a bad side.So many young child are absorbed in computer games.It make them abuse their splendid time in their life.Though computers are all-purpose ,they could be benefitable only when we choose their good sides.