文章层次较为清晰;句法欠规范,多多加强从句的练习;请作者增加词汇丰富度,文中也有较多拼写错误。
I have a friend,she name's Anny.We togher go to shool on the everyday.In the school,she teacher me study more thing.My English be very fine,she is a quite of people,not only study very smile,but also enither qutie caveful,be friend is for me have at good helpful.This I qutie thank of.Iwish to wecan more lief and togher studing