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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中词汇表达比较丰富，可是单词拼写还需加强。
The ancient chinese poetry Li bai once said:"the person who are young in the moring but old at evening." Althrough,life is too short for humbeings,most of us also waste our time in mang meanless things.But how should we cherise time? There is a remark which said:"The greaster use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it."It tell us to do some valuable things,which will be make our life meaningful and gives our confidiences.such as reading books,help some other people who are in troubles and love others or relatives.All the above things sperate our time in life,but it doesn't waste life,becuse,no matter help other or reading books can put sunshine in our heart and make life wonderful and beautiful. For our colleage students,we must work hard in school,and not only learn knowledge from books but also practice in daily life.
