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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少。
The ancient Chinese poetry Li bai once said:"the person who was young in the moring but old in the evening." Although,life is too short for human beings,most of us also waste our time in many meaningless things.But how can we cherish time? There is a remark which said:"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it."It tells us to do some valuable things,which will be make our life meaningful and gives our confidence.such as reading books,helping people who were in troubles and love others or relatives.All the above things separate our time in life,but it doesn't waste life,because,no matter help other or reading books can put sunshine in our heart and make life wonderful and beautiful. For our collegue students,we must work hard in school,and not only acquire knowledge from books but also practice in daily life.
