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2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:40浏览次数:9753
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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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How to cope with the relationship between human beings and the mother nature has been a controversial issue nowdays. Is it too late and just impossible to make any difference in walking out of that awkward situation? People just can't combine their views into one point. Since the environment is getting worse and worse, a voice standing up for a state of inertia represents the negative outlook about the environmental problems. Maybe those people have the attitude that the human activities have done great harm to the environment, ranging from species extinction, air pollution to green house effect. They just feel desperate for the future, getting no help from anywhere.However, there's another voice coming from the positive world. This group of people just reverse their direction and stand in the anti side against inactive,holpless mindset. They are willing to take measures to improve this tough situation,sparing no effort to make everything smoother. When it comes to the current relation between human race and nature, for me, it seems like a couple with the sticky connection. Actually, I am more of a doer than a talker. Nothing will change if anyone of us just sit around without taking action. Recently, the population is growing fast, diverse problems are coming along. Some people are too greedy and selfish when deriving the sources from nature. As for me, first up, we're supposed to change our attitude towards nature and make up our mind to tread the first step. Perhaps we can recycle the waste in daily life, reduce times of driving to work, plant more trees and flowers or just remember to switch off the lights when there's on one there. There are thousands of links between human being and mother nature. We don't have to put entire effort and time into meliorating the environment all the time. What we need to do is only the ordinary deeds in daily life. Step by step, we can kill two birds by throwing one stone in the near future.

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