2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Beijing,a beautiful city. as we all know ,China have rich material resoures.at meantime,many famous attractions worth to visit. in China,there's a saying that:"you are not a man unless you visit the great wall" so ,i will recommed Beijing as the first destination of my foreign frend's trip to China. For example ,The great wall, The palace Museum,The Summer palace.if you come Beijing,you will visit all of the place. and Beijing is the center of culyure and politics that which attract much people come in .on the one hand ,as a international city ,almost people can speak English .on the other hand,the traffic is very convenience for everyone . Beijing attracting millions of people come in.i think it must be great trip to you.