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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12942
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

There are a man and a woman in front of the computer in the picture.They are chatting with their child on the internet.We can use the internet to do more things nowadays.It also gets many effects. Now,we usually use the internet to commicate with others.We the communication by face to face.Our society is developing quickly.We have more ways to communicate.But i think the way of face to face is the best way.Firstly,We can feel their expression and feel their feelings when we talking with others.Secondly,wen can solve the prombles easily,and we are more likely to persuade the other party.Thirdly ,It is easier to promote the affection between us and others. We need more communications by face to face.

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