可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
This new term,here comes a new English teacher.She has a lovely name called Lisa.When class begun,she would play games with us that make our attention.She always told us to study hard to be a useful person in the future.She has black long hair and blue big eyes.She iwas the most beautiful English teacher I met .She is kind-hearted,with the help of Lisa,my English have great sucess.Alought it has a long time to meet her,she will in my heart forever and made influence in my life.