2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Using mobile phone corectly In the era of information and technology ,the cell phone played an important role in our daily life.peole are crossing the street looking at their cell phone and using walking sticks in order to see.It is a common phenomenon when I go out for shoping.I really want to ask that what's wrong with us? We can't deny that cell phone can do lots of things in our socity:listen to music,searhing on the Internet,reading newest information ......But it just a tool to help us conect each other and give us help when I in trouble. In my opinion,we should pay more attention to our family and friends,did not ignore the important around us.