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To whom it may concern, I am writing the letter for the purpose of complaining of some problems about my refrigerator which I bought from your store three days ago. It was a great pleasure to me when the refrigerator arrived.But it is regrettable for us to have found some faults of it.Firstly,the food preserved in it goes bad quickly as it doesn't function at all.Secondly,we could not adjust the temperature to adapt for the utility.Finally,the door cannot be opened without extravagant strength. Taking into consideration what has been discussed above,I strongly demand that you should change a new one for me or refund my money in full.I wish you could treat my complaint seriously and give me a reply as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
