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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足。
As is known to all, the Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional chinese festivals, during which we will gather together enjoy the full moon and eat moon cake, talking about happy things occured in our life and sharing the feelings with each other. What's more,it is an essential festival in our chinese people's life.According to the lunar calendar, the Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated on 15th the August.We would like to travel to somewhere we all like.Besides,we also visit friends and relatives,enjoying the happy moment .