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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
In one person'life,he may spend all his time in pursuing happiness.They could do everything they want to do.Also it exists that some people do not know what they want and how to change. When we were a child,we are taught that studying hard is the most meaningful thing.We are supposed to receive the basic education,and finally enter the key university. Therefore,until we entered the university can't we know the most meaningful thing towards us.We can enlarge our skill on the art,music,athelics and so on.We can not only get in touch with the social life,but also receive the experience from the communication with others.When we are grown up to earn mony to support our life,we may do something to help others who needs help.It can bring some happiness that self-enjoying can not provide.
