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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10391
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;作者句法基础较为扎实。

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There goes a popular proverb in the western country that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket, a true saying from investment community, which indicates that risk needed to be divided while making an investment so that grant loss could be avoided when the investment is faulty. Provide that we put all the eggs into one basket, it occurs that the basket overturns all of a sudden, then, all the eggs are bound to be broken; that exactly what we call basket theory. This word has its profound implication, and it primarily demonstrates us a principle that instead of betting all on a single throw, people are supposed to be prepared for the sake of reducing the risk of total lost. Assuming that you have an enormous sum of money, then part of them can be available to deposit, part for stock and part for the fund, none but putting them for various business can your money lose merely like a piece of cake. In our daily life no matter what, it is of significance for us to do two hands plans or even more, one plan for the affairs we intend to do and one for coping with unexpected situation and emergency. All in all, it is unwise for us to put all eggs into barely one basket. That is to say all of us naturally divide our “investment”. After all, no one would be anticipated to see that the whole army was wiped out.

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