2012年7月7日雅思大作文真题:广告对消费者的影响

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足。

Nowadays, people can see thousands of hundreds of advertisements, not only on the televison, but also everywhere scattering around the floor. Some people say that ads encourage people to buy in quantity rather than promoting its quality. In my opinion, I do agree with that. The first reason is that, there are so many different sorts of ads everyday, and it is difficult for us to make a choice like which ads can be trusted. And even when we determined to buy one certain good, another similar kind of commodity will instantly appear. The second reason, it is commonly heard that the goods we baught are not as the same we thought. The ads themselves are far more attractive than the good itself. That means what we got is not equal to what we saw. As far as i am concerned, on the one hand, people should make the rational choices before they buy something. Not all ads are trustworthy. on the other hand, the merchants ought to improve the quality of the good rather than trying every means to make colorful ads to cheat people.