高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章层次较为清晰；文中拼写错误比较多，同时请注意积累词汇量；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒。

in past,my hometown has very tree,a lot of fish in rive.although it not has beautiful house,people not have good life.now,the house is very good ,house is tall and beautiful,the tree has many shop.every family have a car.but,devople of industry too quickly to environment worsen.the tree is reduse,the rive not have fish.so pollutione is first of all deal with.