2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。

If I can speak with angels and men,but don’t have love,I will be a noisy gongs and cymbals.If I can forecast the future and understand all of the mysteries and knowledge,and believe all of the faith,so it can remove mountains,but don’t have love,I will be small.If I donate all of the wealth,and help some people without money that I will be prided,but don’t have love,I will gain nothing.