2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。

If I can speak with angels and men, but don’t have love, I will be a noisy gongs and cymbals. If I can forecast the future and understand all of the mysteries and knowledge, and believe all of the faith, so it can remove mountains, but don’t have love, I will be small. If I donate all of the wealth, and help some people without money that I will be prided, but don’t have love, I will gain nothing.