2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

It is said that some day the humans will be salved by the computers.Today, a happy life has happened in our life side .There are great increasing popularity to use computer in our dadily life.But i don't think that bad day will be happen, i believe if truely must to have that day,the computer an man will have a friend relationship. I believe,the computer will paly a friend role to human. With the high technologh developing greatly,human will have the ability to make computer have the real emotion.When his master have a bad mood, he can say some comfortable words made human smile.I guess, the human will be more and morn lonely in that day. Thus, the computer will the only parteral he can rely on. If the man got a sick, the computer can call 119 by self.Because, the man can copy his mobile number and can atomotic recognize his system number.In that way,he can save human’s life. So, i think the computer will have the great emotion to some futuer.