2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用。

The way to success There is no denying the fact that everyone wants to be successful in their own life by being a rich, a star or a super hero. However, how to achieve our goals should be considered carefully and there are some ways that may help you find the way to success following. For one hand, you should have a dream and then pursue it resolutely. Even if many difficulties need to be confronted with while you will get closer to your goals and develop your capabilities after you solve the problem after all. For another hand, you should be optimistic because you need to be confident with what you've done, and when you failed that you need to get up soon and try it again and again until you've succeeded. You will never be a winner if you are beaten by difficulties. Thus, you should learn to control your emotion and take good use of it. In conclusion, in order to find the way to success, we need to keep a dream in our hearts and always be optimistic to work hard for it. Only in this way can you achieve your goals and become successful!