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How I Save My Money I`m careful with my money in the daily life. As a country girl form a poor family, I know how important to save my money. I don`t like others to collect coupons and look for group-by deals when eat out or travel. But surely, I buy clothes unless in a sale. People always ask me how can I control the appitites for buying something as a girl. Easily, don`t go shopping, even window shopping.lol.. As a low-paid green hand in the job market, you have lots of bills to pay. It`s a must for you to take careful with your money, no credit card, no e-payment account, these ways of payment can easily make your money disappear. For you, money is a string of number, you don`t think it as money. However, if you pay by cash, you take your money out of your wallet, then you feel your wallet thinner, you calculate it , ho no, it`s too much. How can I pay the rest bills? Then you save your money. It wastes time to go shopping, I seldom go shopping. If I have to buy something, I make a plan. I plan what I should buy, what price I can bear. If I like to buy something, the price is higher than I can pay, I will negotiate with the seller, see if I can get some discount. If not, let it go. When you have saving after you pay all bills. That is a good news. Just don`t squander them, or send all the money back to support your family. You must learn how to invest yourself. Fist, invest your brain. Go some training class to impove your skill. Good skill can get heigher pay in the job market. Then you have more money to support your family. Second, do some financal investment. Third, make friends. Buy your new friends a cup of coffee, it may be the beginning of the friendship. When you don`t have money, you try to save your money; when you have some money rest, invest yourself and invest your money.