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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33623
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
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用户练习作文:

How I Save My Money I`m careful with my money in the daily life. As a country girl form a poor family, I know how important to save my money. I don`t like others to collect coupons and look for group-by deals when eat out or travel. But surely, I buy clothes unless in a sale. People always ask me how can I control the appitites for buying something as a girl. Easily, don`t go shopping, even window shopping.lol.. As a low-paid green hand in the job market, you have lots of bills to pay. It`s a must for you to take careful with your money, no credit card, no e-payment account, these ways of payment can easily make your money disappear. For you, money is a string of number, you don`t think it as money. However, if you pay by cash, you take your money out of your wallet, then you feel your wallet thinner, you calculate it , ho no, it`s too much. How can I pay the rest bills? Then you save your money. It wastes time to go shopping, I seldom go shopping. If I have to buy something, I make a plan. I plan what I should buy, what price I can bear. If I like to buy something, the price is higher than I can pay, I will negotiate with the seller, see if I can get some discount. If not, let it go. When you have saving after you pay all bills. That is a good news. Just don`t squander them, or send all the money back to support your family. You must learn how to invest yourself. Fist, invest your brain. Go some training class to impove your skill. Good skill can get heigher pay in the job market. Then you have more money to support your family. Second, do some financal investment. Third, make friends. Buy your new friends a cup of coffee, it may be the beginning of the friendship. When you don`t have money, you try to save your money; when you have some money rest, invest yourself and invest your money.

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