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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写邮件

发布时间:2013-05-23 22:10浏览次数:14157
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说明:假定你是胡斌,根据下列内容写一封邮件。 
发信人E-mail地址:hubin@163.com 
收信人E-mail地址:KPOHsales@hotmail.com 

内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。

【高频词句】 
1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书 
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

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Dear boss, I am a staff of our company, and I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the problem of outsourcing HR department. The primary factors why we should outsource our HR department lie in the following three aspects. Firstly, as for the enterprise itself, outsourcing HR department effectively reduce the personnel cost and also get new staffs free of charge, which will greatly saves the cost of recruitment. Generally specking, company will need to pay numerous fee for recruitment, such as the site cost, labor costs, equipment costs, as well as management costs, communication costs, etc. Provide that we outsource our HR department, plenty of money bound to be saved. Secondly, for the relationship between the enterprise and the labor, outsourcing HR department contributes to the reducing the dispute between both parties. With the development and growth of enterprises, improving the competitiveness of our enterprise will be our first and core tast. Outsourcing HR department to other HR companies that are more professional than us will help to avoid the unnecessary conflict. What’s more, for our employees, it can enhance their sense of belonging to the enterprise and thus meet the spiritual needs of employees, improve their loyalty, promote their skills and improve their work efficiency. Focus on what they do, they will create greater values for the company. Above all are my sincere advice after serious consideration. Thanks for wasting your precious time to read it.

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