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My hometown is located in the south of China. A beautiful city is called Sichuan. There is no denying that Sichuan is an interesting place.first of all, I would take you to chengdu,there is amuzing city.Because of the person,all of them, them always friend with anyone.there have many yamey foods, and we can visitied pandas .chengdu is the hometown of panda.Next,we can going to Leshan to see the statue ,this is the biggist in the world.Then,I will take you to Jiuzaigou there have nature park.you must be fall in love with there I hope you have a good holiday !my dear.