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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71623
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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My hometown is located in the south of China. A beautiful city is called Sichuan. There is no denying that Sichuan is an interesting place.first of all, I would take you to chengdu,there is amuzing city.Because of the person,all of them, them always friend with anyone.there have many yamey foods, and we can visitied pandas .chengdu is the hometown of panda.Next,we can going to Leshan to see the statue ,this is the biggist in the world.Then,I will take you to Jiuzaigou there have nature park.you must be fall in love with there I hope you have a good holiday !my dear.

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