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Views of Saving Money As we know, the students who get the money from their parents to provid daily life.even that they can’t depend on themself to make money.for which we should try our best to save money.so that our parents will not hard work. as a student,expecially as a universtry’s student,forcing on expensive schooling and cost of living,it is a heavy burden.if you birth a poor family,you will take large debt.what’s more,your parents may more better harding work ,they might find variety of job.as you know,I come from a countryside and poor family,besides,my parents who have to adopt to us and offer an opportunity to make us go to school.in daily life ,we lessly to go shopping or buy new clothes.even more we have never travelling with my family.some time,if I want to buy some things,I will chose group-buy,because I think it is cheep.so,we should saving money in daily life. In a word.saving money not only reducing our parents burden,but also will make a good habbit.for of us,in our free time we should get a job,becaming a independ’s person.
