2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
The computer can help us to learn the knowledge, to get a lot of information international and to read the book. But we can't depend it every moment! There are many schoolmate around me, they use computer too much, and they don't thinking, if they have problem or something unaware, they will ask the internet.In the long run, that's too bad. In the military ,hacker uses internet to get our confidential information. it will damage our interest. Even more serious, it will encroach our country. In addition, we need spend pretty penny to get internet. For example, some people plays the game, and buy some equipment in the game.