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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(39):过度依赖电脑的弊端

发布时间:2013-11-18 17:34浏览次数:10565
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Perhaps the biggest difference is in the growth of computers. Computers can think, remember and calculate faster than any human brain. A computer can hold more than a billion facts in its memory. There are computers that are so big that they would fill this entire auditorium with machinery. Business and banks are now managed by computers. Students’ grades, their marks are all managed by the computer, not from your teachers. In America we pay bills. We have to pay our children’s university study from a computer and I pay the computer who then writes me another letter to say, “Thank you for your payment. You now own such-and-such amount.” This is not even seen by a human being. It is all between me and the computer. However, if a computer makes a mistake, that won’t help you. If a computer makes a mistake about one of you, it is terribly difficult to correct that mistake. And sometimes a computer does make a mistake; that mistake is never learned by another computer and the same mistake will go into other computers. And it becomes terribly difficult for one person to correct a mistake that has been made. So in many ways people have become the servant of computers who are bigger and cleverer than they are. Of course, computers speed up every operation because computers can immediately record, remember facts and produce new information that is combined with these facts. It makes science possible. Modern science would not be possible without the computers to do the calculations.
 
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你可以用实例或其他方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子.
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;

2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,

并包括如下要点:

沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;
骇客入侵对国家带来的危害;
上网需要大笔的费用。
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

The computer can help us to learn the knowledge, to get a lot of information international and to read the book. But we can't depend it every moment! There are many schoolmate around me, they use computer too much, and they don't thinking, if they have problem or something unaware, they will ask the internet.In the long run, that's too bad. In the military ,hacker uses internet to get our confidential information. it will damage our interest. Even more serious, it will encroach our country. In addition, we need spend pretty penny to get internet. For example, some people plays the game, and buy some equipment in the game.

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