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2006年考研英语作文真题:盲目的崇拜

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:57浏览次数:2859
要求:
题目 盲目的崇拜(题目自拟)
说明 Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160~200 words
要求
1.describe the photos briefly
2.interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them
3.give your point of view

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
评语:

拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

These photos mirror a widespread phenomenon among young people, which is called "idol worship". As can be seen from the photo on the left, a fan puts "beckham", the name of football star, on his face. Similarly, in the photo on the right, a barber is giving the young man a haircut according to the hairstyle of beckham. In fact, there is nothing wrong with the phenomenon. On the one hand, with an idol to admire, young people are encouraged to strive for excellence in whatever they do. From these stars, young people know that he must work hard if he wants to achieve the same successes as those made by their idols. On the other hand, we can't ignore the fact that nowadays some people are misled by the blind idol worship. For example, some people think they can become famous overnight through imitating the hairstyle, fashion style and so on. Actually, this is an impossible dream. In short, we should take an objective attitude towards the phenomenon. For one thing, young people should be aware of the positive effect of it on their growth. For another, the correct guidance should be given to young people. Only in these ways can they benefit more from admiring the stars.

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