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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3100
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
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1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
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用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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My opinion on certificate craze As we all know, it is believed that we will have a more bright and successful future as long as we can get the certificate. And nowadays, more and more people tend to take part in all kinds of certificate tests for different reasons such as getting a better job, having a promotion or earning more money. Though they do well in the exam, they may be lack of experiment of action which will give rise to a lot of problems that are following. For one hand, once people get the certificate, they may become lazy and give up practicing. It will have a negative effect on our development for forgetting what we have learnt quickly which we have spent a lot of time in studying. Thus, it will cause a wasting of time and energy. For another hand, people can't focus on their work because they need to have a review and get ready for the exam. So, they may fail to finish their works in time. In conclusion, we should be more objective toward the certificate and pay more attention to what we really need. Only in this way can we have a more effective life and avoid wasting time!

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