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过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分高级词汇，单词拼写也要仔细；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化。
The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival ,was named duanwu festive or duanyang festive .Which is one of the important festive and origins in China .It has a long history since it is named as a festive .So ,let me tell you some informations of it . There are different of activities from it .For example ,Dragon Boat Racing .In this day ,they will take part in a game from around the country and in orde to get a good grades and win the prace .By doing this ,Not only do it makes people has a fun day ,but also it inhernt the trational moral excellence of China .Besides ,there are kind of foods on table .Such as Zongzi ,which is absolutely necessary in this day .Whatever children or adults who like it very much .What's more ,some people from other place also eat eggs or eat ricfield ell and drink wine of xunhuang and so on .Whatever where you stay in ,you will see a lively phenomena . In a conclusion .The May 5th when is a important a day ,not only do inherent it , but also we should develop it and win a good name in the world ,even try our best to do well depend with ourselves .
